Its a nice idea actually. It has many variations which is really good. I would certainly want to see it with some enhancement. First thing is its static! Choirs could have been benefited with modulation...aka swells. A reverb on master to put all together or to have the feel that everything in a room but I know EWSO is hard to mix with external reverb. At 5.40 the velocities are too high and seem like screaming. These are just minor changes which I think will make it more attractive with a kick in it.